Raining in the Dark Cave of My Winter Car (Part Two)

Certain types of similes and metaphors come up over and over in literature, poetry, pop songs, and the visual arts. Most lend themselves just as easily to larger uses like symbolism theme-ish stuff. Last time, I listed some of the most common – metaphors which are probably obvious to most of us, but which nevertheless manage to remain elusive for far too many of my students. Today, we’ll look at a few easy examples suitable for the classroom.

As with other literary devices, my examples are heavy on popular music because it tends to be so much more accessible than the legit stuff we keep hoping they’ll learn to appreciate. It’s not essential that students know or like the songs you choose, but it’s nice when that works out from time to time.

From “Here Comes The Sun” by the Beatles:

Little darlin’, it’s been a long cold lonely winter – little darlin’, it feels like years since it’s been here

Here comes the sun – here comes the sun – and I say, it’s alright

Little darlin’, the smiles returning to their faces – little darling, it seems like years since it’s been here

Here comes the sun – here comes the sun – and I say, it’s alright…

Little darlin’, I feel that ice is slowly melting – little darlin’, it seems like years since it’s been clear

Here comes the sun – here comes the sun – and I say, it’s alright

Let’s start with the obvious – these lines work just fine on a strictly literal level. Maybe the author just really likes the spring. It’s a much richer piece, however, if we read it as a song of hope – of coming through difficult times and feeling better about the future as a result.

Here’s another fairly light example from “Singing in the Rain” (a tune which predates the movie by 20+ years):

I’m singing in the rain, just singing in the rain – what a glorious feeling – I’m happy again

I’m laughing at clouds, so dark up above – the sun’s in my heart and I’m ready for love

Let the stormy clouds chase everyone from the place – come on with the rain, I’ve a smile on my face

I walk down the lane with a happy refrain – just singing, I’m singing in the rain

Why am I smiling and why do I sing? Why does September seem sunny as spring?

Why do I get up each morning and start? Happy and head up with joy in my heart

Why is each new task a trifle to do? Because I am living a life full of you.

In the film, Gene Kelly quite literally sings this song in the rain – so there’s that. The lyrics are clearly intended to work on a metaphorical level as well – “the sun’s in my heart” and “September seem[ing] sunny as spring” and such. (Nice alliteration in that second line, by the way.)

Examples of spring as a new beginning or the sun coming out after the rain suggesting hope or joy are pretty much infinite – “Mr. Blue Sky” (E.L.O.), “I Can See Clearly Now” (Johnny Nash), “You Are My Sunshine” (most famously covered by Johnny Cash), “Daybreak” (Barry Manilow – who I’m including mostly just to see who’s paying attention), “Beautiful Day” (U2), “Unwritten” (Natasha Beddingfield  – this one also has a nice window metaphor in the mix), or even “Ain’t No Sunshine” (Bill Withers, with a little reverse on the theme).

The other seasons are important in much great literature and poetry, but less common in popular music. Darkness, on the other hand, comes up quite a bit – especially for artists who want to sound, well… dark. If you’re not sure where to start, consider “The Dark Side” (Muse), “Darkside” (Blink-182 – this one has thinly veiled drug references), “Beware of Darkness” (George Harrison), or “In the Dark” (Billy Squier – although there’s some sexual innuendo near the end).

Depending on your audience, darkness and night help communicate the trauma of abuse as well. In the musical “Spring Awakening,” Martha reveals her experience to her friends in “The Dark I Know Well”:

I don’t scream though I know it’s wrong – I just play along

I lie there and breathe – like there and breathe…

There is a part I can’t tell about the dark I know well

There is a part I can’t tell about the dark I know well

“In the Night” by Weekend addresses similar abuse in slightly more elusive terms, and I suspect there are at least a dozen other examples out there for anyone who chooses to look. In most cases, the darkness and night are probably both literal and metaphorical. While I wouldn’t include such a triggering topic on any worksheets or PowerPoint presentations, it nevertheless demonstrates how effectively figurative language can capture negative experiences and emotions as well as it does happy, optimistic stuff.

Seasons other than spring are less commonly referenced in popular music, but that doesn’t mean they’re never used at all. Here’s an excerpt from “Winter Song” by Ingrid Michaelson and Sara Bareilles:

This is my winter song to you – the storm is coming soon – it rolls in from the sea

My voice, a beacon in the night – my words will be your light – to carry you to me

Is love alive? Is love alive?

They say that things just cannot grow beneath the winter snow – or so I have been told…

I still believe in summer days – the seasons always change – and life will find a way

I’ll be your harvester of light and send it out tonight so we can start again

Is love alive? Is love alive? …

The storm is coming soon – it rolls in from the sea

My love a beacon in the night – my words will be your light

My love a beacon in the night – my words will be your light to carry you to me

Is love alive? Is love alive?

Nothing overly complex here, but they get in winter and summer and the changing of seasons and light and storms and OMG what a cornucopia of metaphorical staples!

In “I Hit the Brakes,” Admiral Twin uses a basic driving metaphor to explore a relationship in which two people seem to be wanting very different things:

I should have known by the look on your face when you climbed in the car where you wanted to go

Rumors I’d heard, no longer ignored – you opened your mouth, but before you could speak

I said no, I really don’t think I want to know – I really don’t think I want to go that far now

Let’s just stay right where we are now – leave well enough alone

I squint at the road but I can still see windshield reflections; you’re staring at me

You’ve something to say that I don’t want to hear, and it gets hard to drive when I’m covering my ears

So I say no, I really don’t think I want to know – I really don’t think I want to go that far down

I’d rather stay uninvolved now

These fevered confessions frighten me, and though you’re my friend

I swear if you don’t stop soon it’s a long walk home again

You just won’t quit – what made you believe I wanted to hear the secrets you keep?

Now I see what it takes – your head hits the windshield when I hit the brakes

’Cause I said no, I really don’t think I want to know – I really don’t think I want to go that far now…

You’ve gotten me involved now – now look what you’ve done

It would be easy to get bogged down in the distinction between metaphor or symbolism here, but the important thing is how the writer combines the familiar terrain of a car ride (including the terrifying implications of a head hitting the windshield) with the complexities of human relationships. We’re left unable to say for certain whether the issue is primarily about the passenger (“I don’t feel that way about you”) or the driver (“I’m terrified of intimacy or commitment”), but we certainly feel the intensity by the time it’s through.

The musical “Dear Evan Hansen” loves playing with symbols and at least one idiom (the protagonist, Evan Hansen, literally falls out of a tree in the forest and no one hears him or cares). Evan’s struggles are expressed in “Waving Through A Window,” which utilizes several common metaphors – but in interesting, thought-provoking ways:

I’ve learned to slam on the brake before I even turn the key

Before I make the mistake – before I lead with the worst of me…

Step out, step out of the sun if you keep getting burned

Step out, step out of the sun – because you’ve learned, because you’ve learned

On the outside, always looking in – will I ever be more than I’ve always been?

’Cause I’m tap-tap-tapping on the glass – I’m waving through a window

I try to speak, but nobody can hear – so I wait around for an answer to appear

While I’m watch-watch-watching people pass – I’m waving through a window

Before we get to “tap-tap-tapping on the glass,” notice the simple car metaphor in the first line. The absurdity of hitting the breaks before starting the car brings powerful pathos to Evan’s isolation and fear of rejection. If we couldn’t fully relate before, that line alone ought to do the trick.

Next comes the sun – in this case acting both as illumination (“because you’ve learned”) and pain (“you keep getting burned”). At first glance, this contrasts with his complaint that “I try to speak, but nobody can hear”; as it turns out, even Evan’s insecurities are jumbled and contradictory. In that sense, he’s just like most of us.

The strongest metaphor throughout, however, is the window on which he’s “tap-tap-tapping.” Not only is it repeated in various forms throughout the song, it’s emphasized through alliteration (“watch-watch-watching people pass” and “waving through a window”), repetition (“watch-watch-watching” and “tap-tap-tapping”) and onomatopoeia (the “tapping”). In this case, the window metaphor emphasizes the singer’s sense of isolation from the rest of the world –  “on the outside, always looking in.”

While it’s not obvious from this song alone, the window also represents the various screens through which we utilize social media. The staging of the show utilizes multiple cell phone and laptop-shaped screens with scrolling posts and endless notification noises. Many of Evan’s interactions with others occur via his laptop or other devices, further emphasizing his sense of distance and isolation, even when he’s actively communicating. As he learns to open up (instead of waiting on the rest of the world to let him in), we see more face-to-face interactions. Throughout the play, online communication is primarily used when shaping false narratives or identities. Conversely, while not every face-to-face relationship is honest,  every honest relationship moment we see occurs face-to-face – not “through a window.”

I know, right?! ISN’T FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE JUST THE BEST?!?

When you’re falling in a forest and there’s nobody around, do you ever really crash or even make a sound?

When you’re falling in a forest and there’s nobody around, do you ever really crash or even make a sound?

Did I even make a sound? Did I even make a sound? It’s like I never made a sound. Will I ever make a sound?

It’s hard to imagine a more resonant expression of our universal need to feel “heard.” As I’ve harped on with other literary devices, it’s fine if we want to take a moment to discuss the “falling in a forest” reference and whether it’s an idiom or a metaphor or symbolism or a future injunctive appositive, but never at the expense of exploring what it means, and suggests.

We study literary devices to make us better readers, listeners, writers, and speakers – not to make us better categorizers of literary devices. Even the most common metaphors and symbols – light and dark, weather, the seasons, doors and windows, cars and roads, etc. – can be used in fresh, interesting ways. In turn, they can bring depth or different perspectives to thoughts, feelings, and situations which are both unique and universal.

That’s the power of language.

Like A Metaphor

girl dressed as an angel sitting on foldup stool textingI’m about to commit the gravest of blasphemies against ELA doctrine, so I might as well get it out of the way up front.

It’s silly that we have different names for “similes” and “metaphors.” They’re the SAME THING. The distinction is purely technical and largely irrelevant.

Alliteration is alliteration whether it occurs in multiple sentences or a single pair of words. The name doesn’t change based on whether the repeated consonant is hard or soft, capitalized or lowercase.

Onomatopoeia is onomatopoeia whether the sounds being emulated are emitted from living creatures or inanimate matter – loud or soft, comforting or frightening.

Personification is personification. Imagery is imagery. Foreshadowing is foreshadowing. Themes are themes.

But metaphors are only metaphors if they don’t use “like” or “as.” If either of those words appears, suddenly they’re similes. As a result, we spend so much time trying to help students distinguish between the two that we lose sight of why these devices exist in the first place.

A metaphor compares two things which aren’t otherwise alike in order to emphasize one or more characteristics of the primary character or situation being described.

A simile, on the other hand, compares two things which aren’t otherwise alike in order to emphasize one or more characteristics of the primary character or situation being described… and uses “like” or “as” to do so, so it’s a tad less intense.

“You’re an angel” is a metaphor.

“You’re like an angel” is a simile.

These aren’t exactly the same, but they’re close enough that they shouldn’t require multiple worksheets to tell them apart. And just to complicate things, not every description using “like” or “as” is a simile.

“I’m going to the Halloween party dressed like an angel” is neither a simile nor a metaphor – it’s just a description. But we get kids so focused on that “like” and “as” nonsense that they feel betrayed when statements like this don’t qualify.

That’s a shame, because a decent metaphor (or simile) can bring connection, complexity, or any number of other interesting characteristics to a piece of literature, a simple poem, a pop song, or even a persuasive essay – often more efficiently and effectively than any other literary device. There are endless iterations of this across multiple genres, but for now I’m going to stick with a few easily digestible examples from popular music – the kind you’d use when first teaching these devices to kids.

Most musical examples are fairly straightforward…

From “I Am A Rock” by Simon and Garfunkel:

I’ve built walls – a fortress deep and mighty that none may penetrate

I have no need of friendship – friendship causes pain – it’s laughter and it’s loving I disdain

I am a rock – I am an island

From “Life Is A Highway” by Rascal Flatts:

Life’s like a road that you travel on – when there’s one day here and the next day gone

Sometimes you bend – sometimes you stand – sometimes you turn your back to the wind…

Life is a highway – I wanna ride it all night long

If you’re goin’ my way, well – I wanna drive it all night long

From “Hungry Like The Wolf” by Duran Duran:

I’m on the hunt, I’m after you

Mouth is alive, with juices like wine and I’m hungry like the wolf

From “We Got The Beat” by Talib Kweli:

Coming from the deep black like the Loch Ness, now bring apocalypse like the Heart of Darkness…

You get the idea. Others, though, are developed a bit more thoroughly, as in this excerpt from “Buggin’” by the Flaming Lips:

All those bugs buzzing around…

Well they fly in the air and you comb your hair

And the summertime will make you itch the mosquito bites

The buzz of love is busy buggin’ you

Well they fly in the air as you comb your hair

And they’re splattered up and down your windshield – the headlights

Well, they bite – yeah, they bite – but you can’t see them there

But they bite – yeah, they bite – but you can’t tell they’re there

Does love buzz? Because that’s what it does…

We have multiple things going on here. There’s all that onomatopoeia of the buzzing and splattering and the alliteration of the bugs biting. But there’s also an underlying metaphor – love is like bugs in the summer. It’s annoying and messy, but it’s everywhere and chances are, you can’t escape it. Love is probably the most written about subject in all of human history, but this quirky metaphor finds something new to say about it. Exactly what that is may be difficult to explain – but that’s why the writer uses the metaphor in the first place.

In “Brick” by the Ben Folds Five, we have the recurring metaphor referenced in the title:

Now that I have found someone, I’m feeling more alone than I ever have before

She’s a brick and I’m drowning slowly – off the coast and I’m headed nowhere

She’s a brick and I’m drowning slowly…

A brick isn’t a bag of concrete, but it’s enough that over time the pull becomes unbearable – especially when you can’t quite reach dry land and aren’t even sure what direction you’re going. The details described in the rest of the song are quite specific, but the experience of being pulled down by a relationship you don’t feel free to escape is universal – hence the power of the metaphor.

Things don’t always have to be so profound, of course. In “If I Were A Bell” from the musical “Guys and Dolls,” love interest Sarah Brown (a “good girl” missionary being swept off her feet by a “bad boy” gambler) uses a series of metaphors to express her happiness with just enough sexual innuendo to provide plausible deniability should anyone question her too closely:

Ask me how do I feel – ask me now that we’re cozy and clinging

Well, sir, all I can say is if I were a bell, I’d be ringing

From the moment we kissed tonight, that’s the way I’ve just gotta behave

Boy, if I were a lamp, I’d light – or if I were a banner, I’d wave

Ask me how do I feel, little me with my quiet upbringing

Well, sir, all I can say is if I were a gate, I’d be swinging

And if I were a watch, I’d start popping my springs

Or if I were a bell, I’d go ding dong ding dong ding…

Ask me how do I feel – ask me now that we’re fondly caressing

Well, if I were a salad, I know I’d be splashing my dressing

Or if I were a season, I’d surely be spring

Or if I were a gate, I would swing – have a fling – almost any old thing

Or if I were a bell, I’d go ding dong ding dong ding dong ding dong ding!

None of these are overly specific – a bell ringing, a gate swinging, a salad “splashing its dressing,” etc. Used this way, the metaphors suggest an emotional state through their cumulative effect. (They don’t all even make sense individually.) The character is experiencing something new and unexpected. She lacks the words to explain it – so… metaphors galore.

Admiral Twin does something similar in “Better Than Nothing At All,” although the cumulative effect of their metaphorical onslaught has a very different tone:

I’m a bitter pill on your tongue, but I tell you – I’m better than nothing at all

I go down as smooth as a nail or a memory drowning in alcohol…

I’m the ghost in your closet when you turn the lights out – I’m rattling ’round through your bones

I know all your secret designs and amusements – I’m listening on the phone…

I’m the rock at the bottom of where you are falling, and when we kiss you’ll be there

I’m the thorn in your side when you’re trying to be cool (but nobody really cares)

You’re afraid of the outside – you’re afraid of the outside creeping in

You don’t really want me, but you’d better believe

Oh, I’m better than nothing at all – oh, I’m better than nothing at all

A few of these could also be classified as “idioms,” but their purpose is the same. Something very difficult to accurately describe in literal language – in this case, a dysfunctional relationship of some sort – can be captured quite powerfully with the right metaphors.

Some writers use metaphors so subtly that the story (or poem, or song) works just fine without our conscious awareness that anything deeper is going on. I love this example from “Little Black Dress” by Sara Bareilles:

I tried to be everything you’d ever want and sometimes I even stood on my heart and stomped

Now I’m finally alone and dressed for the show – but going nowhere – they don’t need to see me crying

I’ll get my little black dress on, and if I put on my favorite song – I’m gonna dance until you’re all gone…

Now I’m fighting to find the ground again, to steady my feet

Get up off my knees and just remember that I am more than just somebody’s puppet

I can find the cord and then I’ll cut it

I stand a pretty good chance to dust myself off and dance

I’ll get my little black dress on, and if I put on my favorite song – I’m gonna dance until you’re all gone…

And if I tell myself that nothing’s wrong, this doesn’t have to be a sad song – now with my little black dress on

It’s time to connect the dots and draw a different picture up and paint it with the colors of everything I ever was

Return to the scene of the crime, the day I let the music die, and rewrite the final lines cause this time I –

I’ll get my little black dress on, and if I put on my favorite song – I’m gonna dance until you’re all gone…

And if I tell myself that nothing’s wrong, this doesn’t have to be a sad song

Not with my little black dress on

The song is a fairly straightforward celebration of self-empowerment after a bad breakup, and most students will catch the “puppet” metaphor easily enough.

It’s noteworthy, however, that it’s a little black dress – not red (suggesting danger or sexuality) or green (implying rebirth or new growth) or whatever. Black is the color one wears to a funeral. In this case, it’s not the death of an individual, but of a relationship. Combined with the elusive reference to “the day I let the music die” and the recurring insistence that “this doesn’t have to be a sad song,” it’s safe to say the choice was intentional.

You know how these artistic types are, after all.

But let’s just say it’s NOT intentional – that a “little black dress” is simply a standard, all-purpose go-to for many women. Does that invalidate the “funeral” metaphor I just spent so much time on? No, not at all. Metaphors and similes don’t rely on the intent of the author anymore than a pregnancy must be planned in order to produce a baby. Sometimes they just… happen.

The examples above are only a few very basic examples of some of the different ways metaphors and similes can be used; the possibilities are pretty much endless. Many songs, poems, and stories utilize these literary devices in “one-and-done” fashion to make a single point, while others weave thematic tapestries you could spend weeks unraveling. There are also some metaphors so common in stories, poems, and songs, that they’ll require their own separate post – windows, doors, weather, light, dark, seasons, water, birth, cars and driving (or crashing), waking up, falling asleep, etc. We’ll try to tackle a few of these next time.